I think they are great! I'm a newbie so a thing I noticed (that I do too) is you cut off limbs at weird spots...and the seadoo sign needs to be blured. He's a nice lookin guy but all I could focus on was that giant yellow sign!!
My two criticisms are that in #1, the branches look as if they are growing out of the side of his head, and I dont like the diagonal angle of one of the other photos. In one photo, the couple appear dark because you are shooting into the light. I think you are being hard on yourself.
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Project - First shoot - CC PLEASEEE! by JessicaH06 posted 06/03/09 at 05:40 PM Galleries: Photography THIS WAS THE FIRST SHOOT I ATTEMPTED. THESE PHOTOS I TOOK FOR MY MOTHERS DAY ALBUM THAT I MADE. I CANT HELP BUT LOOK AT THEM AND THINK THEY ARE SO BORING AND UNORIGINAL. ANY ADVICE WOULD BE AWESOME! DONT HOLD BACK! =] I KNOW THE GLASSES LOOK SILLY IN SOME PICTURES BUT IT WAS LIKE PULLING TEETH TO GET THEM TO COOPERATE, AO I AGREED TO ALLOW THE SUNGLASSES IN SOME SHOTS. |
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